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Sunday, December 27, 2009

She woke up.
She saw the clear blue sky.
It is still the same. The sun. The birds.
Am I dead?

Out of the blue,
Someone far away screamed. The waves of fear jolted her.
She looked towards the direction of sound, a huge crowd and all with a frighten face.
All of them were looking at her.
She reached up, stood stern and then she noticed behind her, there is a corpse.
She is covered in fresh blood. Her head is smashed into a figure that she can't recognize. She yelled in fear. That is the most horrible things she ever seen.

"What's up with your high pitch cry?" A man suddenly appeared on her back. She jolted and turn away. She knows him. "Cousin Brett?" The man stood in front of her, he was her cousin, died one year ago, in a serious car crash. He just 18 years old at that time. "Lucky thing, it didn't hit your head that hard." He sarcastically laughed. It is so him. "Wait. Aren't you dead?" She curiously asked. "Oh girl, look over there." He pointed towards the ugly corpse again. The corpse was surrounded by a lot of people but none of them dared to near it. It is a taboo. "It is you." He said. Her pupils widen. She shakes her head. This is not me. This is not me. THIS IS NOT ME!!!! "Look, I know is hard but you're dead. So dead." He came behind her and whispered these words to her. She melted. She cried. "Face it, Kee Hwee. You decided to die and you got it. You should be happy." He tapped her shoulder. She cried even harder. Although she prepared for this, she still can't take it. She is died.

"This is what you deserve." A familiar voice shouted from behind. She didn't bother to identify who is that. "Grampa?" Brett said. "You are given to choice to live but yet you threw it away. I am so ashamed of you!!! You little spoiled brat!!!" Grampa yelled at her. But she didn't care. Her blank went blank, and all she can does is cry. "Grampa, long time no see!! I was trying to find you after I died. Why you didn't pick me up? It will be a lot easier if you lead me the way instead of that whining Aunt Lucy." Brett complained. "You, shut up!!!" Grampa pointed at Brett. "You, stop crying for god's sake!!" He pointed at Kee Hwee. "You teenagers are making my afterlife so miserable. Lucky thing is that I don't have heart disease this time, or else, I might die again!! You, Brett, reckless driving. You not only put an end in your life but you also killed a kid's mom. You stupid!!" Grampa whacked Brett's head. "And you, my dear." Grampa soften down and hugged her grand daugther. "I know is hard for you, you should stay strong. You shouldn't choose this. This is not the way to solve your problem." She let loose in her grampa arms. She needed comfort. Grampa tapped her head, consoling her broken heart.

The police came. They packed her corpse. She stopped crying. She was watching them carefully removed her from the tardy ground and put her up into a black van. Her mom and sister was crying so hard. Her mom even fell down. She can't do anything. Everything is over, including her life. She regretted. She shouldn't jump. She shouldn't die. Too late. Too late.

"Is time." Brett said. There is a light in front of them. She suddenly felt so relieved and peace. "What's that?" She asked. "This is the other world for us. It is a very nice world, better than this polluted world. People are kind and nice." Grampa said. "Let's go." Brett took the first move and sprint into the light. He is gone. "C'mon. Let's go." Grampa pushed her near the light. "Grampa, why don't you go first? I will meet you up." She suggested. Grampa nodded and move towards the light. He is gone, too. She took a last glance around. Her school. Her friends. She saw Claryn and Elizabeth crying on each other shoulder and Robin stood beside them, crying too. She saw Madam Cop, put out a tissue and wiped her tears.

She turned back and step forward to the light.
Finally,
She is gone as well.

Appreciate your life.
7:04 AM

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