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Tuesday, December 2, 2008

Until The Sky Turns Blue

Chapter 1--With Tired Eyes, Tired Mind, We Slept.

"If tomorrow never comes, I will be happy" Shannon lies on Josh chest, both watching the black skies filled with twinkle stars.
"Tomorrow will come, with more hope and obstacles, and we will holding hands and face it together. Through good or bad times. Through thick and thin."Josh slowly kiss Shan's forehead and hug her more tightly, like if she will escapes from him and never return.
"I am dying, Josh. We can't denial the truth. I love you with all my heart but... i need to go. Is my time, Josh." Shan looks up to Josh, with tears in her eyes. Her whole life is about going to end, is hard to say goodbye to her love ones.
"Shhhh..."Josh motions his finger to Shan lips and then slowly wipe out Shan tears.
The couples looks onto the empty sky. Each with worries and sadness. Both are hopeless.
"When was the last time we doing this?" Shan break the slience.
"Few days before you..erm..."
"That's quite a long time ago right? 6 months ago."
"Yea, glad that we doing it again." Josh forcefully puts up a smile.
"Josh.."
"Yes?"
"I feel cold."
"I go grab a sweater for you."
"No, Josh, don't. I want you to stay beside me."
"But.." Josh cannot hold his tears anymore. The whole 6 months, he has been trying to hold his emotion. He has to be strong to let his girl to be safe, someone who can lend her shoulder to cry on, a person that she can express all her worries and fear to. He need to stay strong. But he can't hold it anymore. Shan breathing starting to become difficult, gasping for more air.
"Josh, promise me one thing." Shan words become unclear and shaking.
"Yes?"
"Find a person who loves you more than I do. "
"I don't need to search anymore. I got you, always and forever."
"Just listen to me, Josh. I want to you to tell me you will find someone who loves you and she loves you back. Please, Josh. This is my last wish."
"But..." Josh wanted to fight back, but looking at the girl he loves, he just have to obey. "Ok"
"That's good. That's good." Shan kisses Josh cheeks.
"I am tired. I am going to sleep." Shan slowly closes her eyes, her breathing sounds fade, her heartbeat stops and all of the sudden, a cold eerie feeling rushes to Josh body. Josh can't hold it anymore, huging Shan more tightly and tears fall like waterfall. Every moment that they have, flash back in his eyes. The night is enchated with a poor man cries, a man who lost his love and a man who feel lost.
The night ends with a heartbroken fragile sound.
Speechless.
Empty.
And cold.

My new story with a theme of love. I haven't figure out the official title yet. So, is it good, ok or like bad. DO HELP CORRECT MY GRAMMAR.LOL. Do help me out.
9:47 AM

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